Water
23 05 2007The sparkling stream drifts quietly past the smooth rocks.
It flows gently towards the crashing waves of the rugged coastline.
Like an eagle soaring high above the floating clouds.
Drifting back and forth as it wanders on it’s life-long journey.
Hands slapping gleefully upon saturated mirror-like surface.
Blowing tiny bubbles of laughter beneath the ripples.
Leaping bravely into blue plastic-lined paradise.
Dive down deep and listen to the humming in your ears.
Cruising the waves on a long, sleek, stream-lined plank.
Dipping hands, kicking feet, taking the direct route out to open sea.
Closely examining the horizon for that perfect swell of water.
Waiting for the full force of that thrusting motion, the ultimate challenge.
Delicate droplets of rain falling on the slippery wet grass.
Trickling together into small brook, then into larger waterway.
Searing hot sun evaporates wet particles into clouds of moisture.
Rising up into the ever-changing atmosphere where chilling cold air lingers.
Categories : Poetry, school
Title: Sucked In Author: Paul Jennings Illustrator: Terry DentonThe jar has something floating around inside it. Something awful. Something grey and fleshy. Something foul. Something not alive, but not dead either.A shiver goes down my spine. I wish I could stop peering at the thing in the jar.But I can’t.Everyone else in the class is staring at the jar.The teacher has an idea. He tells our class to make up a story about the little slushy monster. Everyone lets out a groan. The others don’t know what to write, so the teacher starts them off.This is a book about a teacher who has a jar on his desk. The jar contains an unknown thing that the class cannot identify. The teacher challenges the students to write a story about the thing in the jar.No-one knows what to write, so the teacher starts them off by telling them his version of what the jar contains. His story is that it’s an appendix and it belongs to a boy called Trevor.Trevor has his appendix removed in hospital, but he asks the surgeon to not destroy the appendix, but to put it in a jar so that he can keep it and never be apart from it.The next day Trevor brings the appendix in a jar to school and everyone is staring at it. The teacher asks Trevor to go somewhere and while he is out of the room, the appendix jiggles up and down inside the jar.The teacher and the Principal are very worried about this strange behaviour of the strange looking thing in the jar, so they confiscate it. Eventually the appendix escapes, eats up a cat and a dog, and then finally it eats up………..well, if I TOLD YOU, then that would ruin the story, so read it yourself!!!I think this book is intriguing because it is a little bit disgusting and also a bit fascinating. The reader will be captivated by the way the Author set out this book. Paul Jennings puts a story within a story.The title “Sucked In” is a clever remark because the students get sucked in by the teachers story, and Trevor gets sucked in by the appendix.I recommend this book for those who want a story with an unusual outcome. It is different because it is a twisted plot.
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